Abstract
Rather than seeing hypertext as offering only distracted reading, this paper
argues that annotation software provides students with the opportunity to
perform recursive reading: a process that facilitates knowledge transfer and
encourages intersectional critical approaches to texts. As hypertext editions
and online reading communities have proliferated, scholars have theorized that
these layered, interactive modes of reading produce distracted readings of
texts, especially in pedagogical contexts. With annotation software, however,
researchers and students have the opportunity not just to consume these
distracted readings, but to produce them. Within the classroom, annotation
software assignments require a deeper psychological investment from students
than simply consuming a hypertext edition. By choosing how and where to annotate
a particular text, students’ distributed modes of attention are re-focused on
the text itself, pulling disparate threads of thought together.
You know you have to read ‘between the
lines’ to get the most out of anything. I want to persuade you to do
something equally important in the course of your reading. I want to
persuade you to ‘write between the lines.’ Unless you do, you are not likely
to do the most efficient kind of reading.
[Adler 1940, 11]
Distracted Reading[1]
It has become a cultural cliché to lament the dawn of the Internet age as the
death of intellectual thought. One need not look far in popular media to find
the myriad thinkpieces suggesting that the
distractibility of youth is at an all-time high,
that Google has replaced the need for memory, and that media
audiences
consume only
clickbait rather than “real news.” These
(ironically) online arguments are supported by illustratively titled volumes
about the evils of online reading, such as Nicholas Carr’s
The Shallows: What the Internet is Doing to Our Brains and Mark
Bauerlein’s
The Dumbest Generation: How the Digital Age
Stupefies Young Americans and Jeopardizes the Future
[
Carr 2010]
[
Bauerlein 2008]. According to these authors, readers who consume
text exclusively or mainly online have lost the ability to concentrate on a
single text from beginning to end: or in other words, they are no longer linear
readers, dedicating their time and energy to the words on the page in the order
they appear. Instead, these readers are hopelessly distracted by the online
reading experience, as ads, embedded links, and mouse-over hovertext pull their
attention several directions at once, ensuring that nothing of substance enters
long-term memory. In this view, supported by educational studies that
demonstrate that reading online encourages selective consumption and lesser
recall [
Liu 2005]
[
Carr 2010], the Internet’s incredible potential for information
sharing and computing power is too easily overshadowed by the possibly more
numerous possibilities for distraction and procrastination.
On the other hand, defenses of reading and intellectual thought in today’s
hyper-connected world have become nearly as common as their critiques. In
particular, Jerome McGann argued early on that reading online, especially text
enhanced with hypertext, enables radial reading rather than (or in addition to)
linear reading, which “involves decoding one or more of
the contexts that interpenetrate the scripted and physical text”
[
McGann 1991, 119]. The embedded links that direct readers to images, sources, and
supplemental information, the online dictionaries that define words as they are
read, and the sheer potential for directed individual research all add up to a
deeper and broader reading of a text, rather than a shallower one. According to
McGann, moreover, hypertext only makes manifest the fact that all texts, to
greater and lesser extents, “function in a radial field”
[
McGann 1991, 126]. Books have never existed in a vacuum, and to some extent the linear
reader who starts at the beginning of a text and reads through to the end is
largely a fiction: a “linear” reader may stop to consult with
a dictionary or historical source, flip to the endnotes or critical works in an
edited edition, or mentally or physically compare the work at hand with any
number of other related texts. In other words, linear reading is interrupted by
radial thinking. A well-designed online text, by embedding all of these
possibilities in a single web page, might paradoxically allow for a more
continuous reading experience than a physical book that would need to be put
down to acquire the same information. To a medievalist, hypertext can also
function as a modernization of a long-standing practice: consider a
heavily-glossed medieval Bible, in which scribes used the margins of the page to
both reproduce and contribute to interpretations of the text such that on some
pages the distinction between Biblical text and commentary is nearly erased. It
is difficult to argue that such commentary, while undeniably distracting, is
either shallow or anti-intellectual. Nor does online reading disallow or destroy
more traditional linear reading practices: David Dowling describes the
phenomenon of online reading groups communally reading
Moby
Dick, for example, and points to the revival of longform news
articles that are no longer limited in length by the physical standards of the
printed page [
Dowling 2010]
[
Dowling 2014]. Recent studies in education also suggest that the
reading comprehension gap between print and screen is closing [
Cull 2011]
[
Eden and Eshet-Alkalai 2013]. According to this perspective, the Internet age
offers new horizons of insight, knowledge, and shared intellectual work.
These defenses complicate the too-attractive binary that longform linear reading
is “good,” under attack, and must be recovered in online
communities, while hypertext-enabled radial reading is “bad,”
distracted, and deliberately erodes traditional thought. Yet in the classroom,
we often reproduce such assumptions unthinkingly, assigning traditional reading
and writing assignments that can clash poorly with a student who is
accomplishing these tasks on a phone or tablet. There is also little doubt that
a student occupied with Facebook both contributes and learns less than one not
so distracted. The hyperbolic clash between naysayers predicting the end of
human civilization and enthusiasts pointing to a blessed new dawn faces a far
more prosaic reality in the classroom: that the Internet age presents neither
our salvation nor our damnation, but instead a set of tools. Hypertext and other
aspects of online text can undoubtedly enhance our students’ understanding by
encouraging radial reading. They can also present considerable distractions, as
anyone who has gone on a late-night Wikipedia binge can relate. In the
classroom, then, our task is to harness the potential of hypertext without
falling prey to the unproductive kind of distraction.
In order to accomplish this goal, we considered how we might encourage students
to consume texts online in deliberate, scholarly ways. Many studies have already
indicated that online hypertext annotations can combat the tendency towards
shallow digital reading that [
Carr 2010] notes in
The Shallows. [
Porter-O’Donnell 2004]
demonstrates that annotated content promotes greater reading comprehension in
digital contexts than the same content without such annotations. [
Chen and Chen 2014] likewise report statistically significant improvements
in elementary-age students’ reading abilities with the use of a collaborative
annotation system. The majority of these studies, however, focus on reading
comprehension as the primary goal, which in the college English classroom is
only the necessary first step in teaching students how to critically engage with
a text. Our goal is not to have students simply understand the content of a
text, but instead to teach them to see the multivalent, polyphonic possibilities
in every text. We hypothesized that we could harness the same deeper reading
encouraged by online annotation in order to produce what we call recursive
reading: a process that goes beyond simple comprehension in order to facilitate
knowledge transfer and encourage a layered and intersectional critical approach
to texts.
The Role of Recursive Reading in Knowledge Transfer
In pursuit of that aim, we considered how we accomplished one of the most basic
goals of English literature classes: teaching students to read critically. In
our methods class at our small liberal arts college, we teach our students
methodologies and theories for approaching literature — such as formalism, new
historicism, psychoanalytic criticism, queer theory, etc. — and we do this
either overtly by calling attention to the names and histories of these
practices, or implicitly through our own emphasis on certain approaches with
certain texts. For instance, if we are teaching Charles Dickens’ Oliver Twist, we might choose to engage new
historicist methods by exploring the historical implications of
industrialization, including background on the Poor Laws, mortality rates, and
the general squalor of nineteenth-century London. Alternately, if we teach
Chaucer’s Wife of Bath’s Tale, we might approach
gender studies by discussing medieval conceptions of sex and gender and how both
are implicated in the question of authorship.
Immediately problematic, however, is that while we might spend a great deal of
time teaching a methodological or theoretical approach in conjunction with one
text, that approach seemed to disappear as soon as we moved to the next text.
Students siloed their knowledge of a particular methodological approach, such
that they could apply new historicism only as it pertained to Dickens or gender
studies as it applied to Chaucer. What we as instructors saw as lenses a
critical reader might use to interrogate any text became fixed to a
single text, or at best a time period. The difficulty of knowledge transfer
became clear: students resisted seeing these concepts as dynamic, intersecting,
and malleable, instead fusing particular theories with individual texts or time
periods. There was no transfer across texts, no return to prior knowledge to
integrate it as we moved forward on our syllabi.
In all fairness to our hard-working students, research shows that knowledge
transfer is difficult. As the authors of the book
How
Learning Works note:
Most research has found […] that (a) transfer occurs
neither often nor automatically, and (b) the more dissimilar the
learning and transfer contexts, the less likely successful transfer will
occur. In other words, much as we would like them to, students often do
not successfully apply relevant skills or knowledge in novel
contexts.
[Ambrose et al 2010, 108]
Therefore, our students’ inability to read across theoretical and
methodological approaches did not originate from laziness or lack of engagement,
but from the need for this skill to be explicitly taught rather than assumed. In
their germinal work on knowledge transfer, David Perkins and Gavriel Salomon
posit that there are a range of types of transfer. One kind of transfer “involves the spontaneous, automatic
transfer of highly practiced skills, with little need for reflective
thinking,” while the other kind of transfer requires “the explicit conscious
formulation of abstraction in one situation that allows making a
connection to another”
[
Salomon and Perkins 1989, 118]. Often referred to as low-road vs. high-road transfer, what distinguishes
the two is the need for “mindful abstraction” or
“deliberate, usually metacognitively guided and
effortful, decontextualization of a principle.” Emphasizing the need
for teaching these skills, Perkins and Salomon insist that the best environment
for transfer is one in which “skills of mindful attention to and management of one’s
own processes were taught along with the strategies themselves”
[
Salomon and Perkins 1989, 126].
Turning to the role of writing in supporting knowledge transfer, in
Writing Across Contexts, Kathleen Yancey, et. al. ask: “how we can help students develop
writing knowledge and practices that they can draw upon, use, and
repurpose for new writing tasks in new settings”
[
Yancey, Robertson, and Taczak 2014, 2]. Thinking about transfer in the writing context, Yancey et. al. suggest
sequential writing assignments which emphasize return and revision in the
writing process as a way of encouraging transfer. As
Writing Across Contexts indicates, most work about knowledge
transfer has considered it in the context of writing, and as a problem that can
be solved with writing solutions, such as assigning drafts and multiple rounds
of peer and instructor feedback. Yet as we continued to encounter difficulties
with knowledge transfer while teaching literary theory, it seemed to us that the
problem preexisted the writing aspect of our courses. We have all experienced
the student who, when faced with commentary that requires a full revision,
chooses to interpret that feedback in the least revelatory manner possible,
making few to none of the necessary changes. While for some students this
behavior can be linked to lack of time or interest, others with the same issue
lacked neither motivation nor time. What we came to discover was that for many
of these students, the problem lay not in their skills in writing, but to those
in reading. These students, once they had committed their ideas to paper, ceased
to regard their rough draft as
writing – that is, in the full
present progressive sense, an idea still in progress – and instead began to see
it as
reading. No longer was it a fluid form easily changed, but
instead a fixed point, more akin to one of their primary texts than their own
handiwork. This mindset made it almost impossible to engage in the kind of
revision that recursive writing requires.
[2] Moreover, this mindset makes it incredibly
difficult to learn multiple modes of theory. If, to our students, reading is a
fixed point, then by reading critical race theory alongside
Othello, it becomes impossible for students to then transfer it to
The Tempest. In order to help solve the problem
of knowledge transfer, then, we needed to think more not just about writing, but
about how students read and interface with the texts we assign them.
John Bean’s
Engaging Ideas lays out that for
students to become what he refers to in the research as “deep readers” they need to “claim, interact with texts [and
devote] psychological energy to the task”
[
Bean 2011, 162]. Judith and Keith Roberts take this further, suggesting:
A good reader forms visual images
to represent the content being read, connects to emotions, recalls
settings and events that are similar to those presented in the reading,
predicts what will happen next, asks questions, and thinks about the use
of language. One of the most important steps, however, is to connect the
manuscript [students] are reading with what [they] already know and to
attach facts, ideas, concepts or perspectives to that known
material.
[Roberts and Roberts 2008, 126]
Bean, along with Roberts and Roberts, agrees that for students to read
well and read deeply, they must engage and form associations with the text.
Elsewhere, scholars make the overt connection between recursive processes in the
writing practice and strong reading skills. The much-used anthology
Ways of Reading suggests, “strong readers, we’ve said,
remake what they have read to serve their own ends, putting things
together, figuring out how ideas and examples relate, explaining as best
they can material that is difficult or problematic…At these moments, it
is hard to distinguish the act of reading from the act of
writing”
[
Bartholomae and Petrosky 1993, 13]. For Bartholomae and Petrosky, interacting with the text fuses the
process of reading and writing together. The recurring idea that reading and
writing should together emphasize a process of return and connection-making
suggested a method that could help us to surpass our students’ particular
cognitive difficulties. Furthermore, the idea of getting students to form “visual images” to represent
content, as proposed by Roberts and Roberts, immediately called to mind digital
tools. Echoing McGann’s discussions of “radial reading” that replaces linear reading, Rosenwasser and
Stephen, in
Writing Analytically, articulate what
they call recursive thinking:
Thinking is not simply linear
and progressive, moving from point A to point B to point C like stops on
a train. Careful thinkers are always retracing their steps, questioning
their first – and second — impressions, assuming that they have missed
something. All good thinking is recursive — that is,
repeatedly going over the same ground, rethinking connections.
[Rosenwasser and Stephen 2015, 60]
The recursivity scholars like Yancey saw as so crucial to writing, and
Rosenwasser and Stephen to thinking, we realized was equally crucial in reading.
We needed to teach our students to view reading not as a one-and-done singular
act, but instead as a process of returning and rethinking. More than simply
reading a text multiple times, we needed to teach them to be recursive readers,
continually returning to the text (whether their own or someone else’s) with new
information and encountering it afresh, integrating their new knowledge with the
old. If we could encourage visualization via digital tools that spurred our
students to be recursive readers, we might begin to dismantle our particular
problem of siloed knowledge and encourage students to transfer knowledge across
contexts within our classrooms.
Building the Annotation Module
How could digital humanities help us teach our students to read recursively?
Annotation assignments seemed the obvious choice, but annotation, or text
markup, is not limited to digital tools, as our epigraph suggests. Interacting
with the text is a long-standing, analog literary practice, but one that we
wanted to revisit for a particular set of pedagogical outcomes. We needed to use
a tool that would encourage a textual interaction that was both fluid and visual
and that allowed students to return to the same text again and again in order to
emphasize rereading. We also wanted our students' work to be available to the
class as a whole.
[3] These goals together suggested
that a digital annotation tool was the solution to our pedagogical problem.
Looking for options to enhance learning, we turned to Todd Bryant, Language
Technology Specialist in Dickinson College’s Academic Technology department.
Bryant built a local Drupal 7 site utilizing two modules, Annotation and
Annotator, that allowed us to highlight and annotate text. (Code available on
the Drupal community site: Annotation —
https://www.drupal.org/project/annotation and Annotator
https://www.drupal.org/project/annotator). A single Drupal 8 module
providing the same functionality has since been created by Sai Grandhi, a
Computer Science student at Dickinson College, for projects running the latest
version of Drupal. (Code available on the Drupal community site:
https://www.drupal.org/sandbox/bryantt/2528442). Our argument for
using a locally hosted Drupal site over other, hosted annotation projects was
long-term reliability and the advantages to having a custom-built site for our
needs. Using a Drupal site meant that we could have our texts organized and in a
single location as opposed to having students share multiple Google or Office
365 documents. Over time, classes at Dickinson are able to add to the site as
well as utilize the work of previous students as examples of quality annotations
if desired. We also maintain the ability to make sections or even individual
pages of the site publicly available or private.
[4] Bryant also pointed
out, by hosting the site and the database ourselves, we would retain complete
access to the data created by professors and students for future digital
humanities projects.
[5] In the end, a custom-built tool provided us with maximum flexibility
when thinking about the future use of text annotation. While we crafted a
highly-focused annotation project for our classrooms, the tool’s uses could
extend far beyond what we lay out in this essay. Additionally, by developing in
open source, the tools demonstrated can be utilized by others and modified to
fit new kinds of annotation projects.
Our program allows students to log in and access their class poems. Once logged
in, students can add annotations by highlighting text and then typing into the
text box. The resulting mouse-over annotations can be edited and multiple
annotations can be overlaid on the same text. (See
Figure 1 for two visualizations of a poem; one with highlighted areas
and one showing mouse-over hovertext.)
Annotation programs, however, are not new, and if building our own Drupal site
had been out of the question, we could easily have turned elsewhere. Indeed,
other classrooms interested in the possibilities offered by annotation software
can look to places like Rap Genius (
https://rap.genius.com/), which has created a highly-trafficked site
dedicated to the annotation of all genres of text, not just song lyrics. More
academic in focus, MIT’s Annotation Studio (
http://www.annotationstudio.org/) offers “a suite of collaborative web-based annotation
tools” that allow users to “engage and reflect more critically upon texts instead of passively reading
them.” Bryant’s module works similarly to Annotation Studio in that
both sites are using the same tool (which is available here,
http://annotatorjs.org/showcase.html) to highlight text and send the
annotation and its location to the server. Other annotation projects include
Hypothesis (
https://web.hypothes.is/about/) which “enable[s] sentence-level note taking or critique on top
of news, blogs, scientific articles, books, terms of service, ballot
initiatives, legislation and more.” Even programs such as
CommentPress, a WordPress plugin, and Google docs allow users to highlight text
and add annotations with comments or further questions. The practical uses of
annotation assignments, then, are not restricted to those with the capability to
build a custom module.
[6]
Recursive Reading in the Classroom: Examples and Outcomes
Turning to classroom deployment, each of the authors here used the annotation
tool in a total of four sections of Dickinson College’s
Introduction to Literary Studies course over the span of 2015-2017.
In our course catalog, these courses are designed to:
explore the work texts do in the world. This course
examines several texts of different kinds (e.g., novel, poetry, film, comic
book, play, etc.) to investigate how literary forms create meanings. It also
puts texts in conversation with several of the critical theories and
methodologies that shape the discipline of literary study today (e.g.,
Marxist theory, new historicism, formalism, gender theory, postcolonial
theory, ecocriticism, etc.). This course helps students frame interpretive
questions and develop their own critical practice.[7]
A foundational course set up to frame our students’ “interpretive questions”
and “critical practice” over the duration of the major, Introduction to Literary Studies implicitly demands
students learn how to utilize the knowledge of critical theories and
methodologies as they apply to a variety of literary objects. This means that
students will need to be able to transfer knowledge of theories and methods to
new texts within our Introduction to Literary
Studies course as well as to later courses which will build on the
foundational work of the class. Using the annotation tool developed in
consultation with Bryant, we created an assignment where each student chose a
poem and annotated it throughout the term. The catch was that each student
returned to the same poem again and again through the class,
annotating it each time with at least two new annotations utilizing the
methodology or theory we were currently studying.
What we found over the course of the term was that students began to see how the
theories and methodologies interacted, how their own highlighting and
annotations overlapped and intersected, and how repeatedly annotating the poem
allowed them to discover something new with each reading. This ability to return
to a particular reading and visually change and augment it was a moment of
reading deeply. Students read and re-read a text from many angles, viewing it
through a variety of different methodological or theoretical lenses. The
annotation module facilitated a digital space for students to be attentive to
the language of their poem through a recursive reading process.
Recursive reading, or returning to and annotating a single text over and over,
dovetailed with our methods of writing as well. As in most classes emphasizing
writing, the course requires students to return to and revise drafts of papers
as they move through the class. Emphasizing reading as a process much like
writing made both writing and reading recursive, and it encouraged students to
approach their own drafts with the same renewed flexibility as they approached
their chosen poem. Finally, part of what worked particularly well here was that
each student chose a
different poem. With a variety of poems, it
meant that each student became an expert on the chosen poem.
[8] At the end of a semester,
students were left with a visual, layered, hypertext record of their process
(and progress) in critical thinking, resulting in more nuanced integration of
critical methods in their essays and in-class work.
Practically speaking, as a result of their practice with recursive reading in the
annotation module, we saw student improvement across three distinct course
assignments: knowledge transfer across annotations, analytical thinking in
essays, and awareness of knowledge gained in reflection essays. In the exhibits
that follow, we present examples of this student success. First, the annotations
themselves demonstrate examples of recursive reading and knowledge transfer
across theories and methodologies. Second, we offer an example from a student
essay that shows how the annotations encouraged students to see and see again,
prompting internal feedback that led to deeper analytical thinking in their
writing. Third, a final self-reflection essay assignment demonstrates evidence
of knowledge transfer not just within our classes, but potentially to future
classrooms and projects.
Exhibit A: Annotations
In Skalak’s class, after a four-week grounding in the literary theory of
formalism, students encountered a new, more conceptual lens: structuralism.
Scores on the weekly assignment plummeted, from an average of 8.3/10 to 5.5/10.
This drop was not unexpected: most students have encountered formalist
approaches in high school, but it is the rare secondary education that includes
readings on structuralism. Their initial attempts have been overwritten through
the semester-long revision process, but the feedback on one student’s attempt is
indicative of the whole. In the comment accompanying the student's numerical
score, Skalak writes:
You have pointed to a
binary here in this line, but pointing out a binary does not make a
structuralist reading. The rest of your annotation is instead formalist,
focused on the tone and rhythm of the line. To think about this poem as a
structuralist might, consider the following questions: does the poem
construct itself around the binary opposition you notice here, or depend
upon the opposition being absolute and completely opposed? Why is it
significant to oppose these two? How does it affect our understanding of the
poem to see these as opposites?
From Skalak’s feedback, it is
apparent that this student had seized upon a key vocabulary term — binary
oppositions — and assumed that this sufficed to produce a structuralist reading,
suggesting an insufficient understanding of how to apply the theoretical
readings we had discussed in class. Unfortunately, the student misunderstood how
binaries might function within a structuralist reading. In the following week,
however, the class moved on to deconstruction, and once again the students faced
a new theoretical lens through which to view their chosen poem. Skalak
explicitly reminded the students that they could revisit previous sections of
the poem, taking a look at the same lines under a different lens. Nearly half
the class chose to layer their deconstruction reading directly over their
structuralist reading of the previous week, with auspicious results. The student
referenced above submitted these two responses:
The same student who had struggled with her first structuralist
reading had now completely replaced her old annotation with two others: one
structuralist, and one that directly deconstructed that first reading. Here, the
student’s knowledge of formalism allowed her to see the poem’s connection
between inanimate goods and the sensuality of female bodies, which fueled her
structuralist observation that the poem creates four different categories for
these goods/bodies, like the “four corners” of the globe. Her
immediate re-reading of this section to reject such an easy categorization of
the world demonstrates her newfound understanding of deconstruction and
structuralism both. While not a perfect example of either theory, these attempts
demonstrated marked improvement. Rather than leave her lackluster attempt at
structuralism behind as only last week’s mistake, this recursive approach to
reading encouraged new, integrated learning: by reading the poem a second time,
this time through the lens of deconstruction, the student also came to better
understand the structuralism to which it responded. Even better, she
demonstrated successful knowledge transfer within the course as the lessons of
the previous week carried over into the next, building on and augmenting one
another. These annotations also pointed forward to our later studies of feminism
and critical race theory, and she returned to this section with great excitement
in class discussion to add further nuance to her initial readings.
While Kersh’s class covered a slightly different range of critical theory,
evidence of transfer surfaced in annotations where students began to point out
readings that were catalyzed by overlapping or intersecting methodologies. For
example, one student began her reading of Alice Dunbar-Nelson’s “Sonnet” by carefully trying to parse the poem’s
approach to love in the beginning lines, “I had not thought of violets late,/ The wild, shy
kind that spring beneath your feet/ In wistful April days, when lovers mate/
And wander through the fields in raptures sweet.” What started as a
straight close reading of the symbolism of “violets” within the sonnet
became much more nuanced as the student reader began to theorize the metaphor of
violets as it related to the gender of the poet, to the time period in which it
was written, and then finally to race. In the annotation assignment prompt,
students were directed to label their annotations with parenthetical or
bracketed notations that identify the methodology or theory they engage (see
figures above). In the “Sonnet” annotations, the
student begins simply with notations such as “formalism” or “new
historicism” and as the weeks progress the notations begin to reflect the
intersections she has found labeling one “post-colonialism and cultural
materialism” then, more comically, “cultural materialism + a bit of
feminism.” While the student’s comfort with the assignment increased
alongside her willingness to push the boundaries of the prompt’s requirements,
what became increasingly clear was how in her own reading she found the poem
impossible to interpret using a single lens. Similar to Skalak’s student
analyzing “Ithaka,” the student working on
Dunbar-Nelson’s
Sonnet improved her own reading with each new
annotation. Each new interaction with the poem produced not just a
reconceptualization of the text, but articulated an intersection of theoretical
lenses. (See
Figure 4)
Exhibit B: Analytical Writing
This process of recursive reading also proved fruitful when it came to lengthier
analytical essays. After several weeks of annotation practice, our classes
required students to write a formalist essay on their chosen poem. Many chose to
return to subjects they had first noted in their annotations. Returning to their
annotations with fresh eyes, this time aimed at producing a paper-length
analysis, encouraged students to expand and improve upon their initial ideas. As
an example, consider the following student’s initial annotation (
Figure 5) and subsequent thesis:
Through a series of startling and unexpected
metaphors, John Donne makes the unusual assertion that love is, essentially,
nothing but deleterious. Donne employs the use of, primarily, metaphors, to
fully convey the destructive nature of love as a battle. These metaphors,
paired with the overarching theme of warfare, and finally, the conceit of
his heart being broken glass, effectively convey the idea that love is not
what most people perceive it be; it is a damaging and harmful conflict in
which no man can escape victorious. Just as war is a mentally and
emotionally scarring experience, so is love.
This example may seem
to present nothing especially exciting: after all, writers on the subject of
pedagogy have known for years that revising old ideas leads to better writing
outcomes. This is why we have all signed on to the doctrine of first drafts,
second drafts, and multiple sources of targeted feedback. What makes this
example worthy of note, however, is that it resulted not from peer or instructor
feedback, or from a revision of a draft, but from a student
re-
reading the source text and independently revising his
thinking. He moves from a simple observation of recurring war images to a thesis
which takes into account the nuances of the poem’s metaphors.
From a pedagogical perspective, this kind of independent work is the holy grail
of student revision: the student engaged in meaningful revision of his
own draft. While peer review and instructor feedback is crucial to
the writing process, we also want students to see their own shortcomings and
engage with internal feedback during the revision process. And, we might add,
without overly burdening a time-strapped professor with yet
another draft to grade. One may hope, of course, that students would return to
re-read their primary texts and think anew on their own: but with this kind of
annotation assignment, we can have better expectation that they will do so.
Exhibit C: Student Self-Reflection
At the end of any class, we typically have two questions: first, did the students
learn the class objectives? Second, can they articulate what they have learned,
so as to better prepare them to transfer that knowledge forward to future
classes and future assignments? Our first two sets of examples address this
first concern, demonstrating how recursive reading fostered engagement with
critical theory and analytical writing. There we see how students rereading and
reworking a single text from a variety of lenses produced better, richer
engagement with both the lens and the primary text. One way to gauge the success
of this second question is to ask the students to reflect on the annotation
process. In a final assignment, Kersh’s students wrote a reflection paper about
the semester-long annotation assignment addressing two key components. First,
they were to outline their process for annotating their chosen poem and what
they learned from each annotation. Second, they were asked, “what did
annotating the poem, and then writing this paper, teach you? In other words,
what are you taking away from this digital poetry project after the
semester?” In the first two reflections, students articulate how their
process of reading changed during class, showing their own ability to engage in
metacognition, or thinking about how they think:
This process, while long and at times hard to do, taught me many things.
I believe it taught me how to continue to look at one piece of writing
and analyze it through multiple perspectives, and get something new out
of it every time. I also learned not to get frustrated when I don’t
understand something right away, or I don’t see a clear understanding
through one theory. Sometimes it took me two or three
times, reading over the poem to see how I could interpret it or
how it made sense through a new lens. I wouldn’t give up, but I would
teach myself how to breathe and come back to the poem with a fresh
start.
Example 1.
Student A, “Not marble nor the gilded
monuments” by William Shakespeare [emphasis added]
Here, she articulates that rereading allowed her to see “something new… every time.” Moreover,
what is particularly compelling about this student’s response is the way in
which she realizes that return “two or
three times” is essential to the process of reading well. Also
fascinating is the way she imagines her own bodily responses as she thinks about
and works through the poem. Her claim that “I would teach myself to breathe and come back to the poem with
a fresh start” resonates with John Bean’s imperative that students
devote “energy to the tasks” of
reading [
Bean 2011, 162]. Moreover, she is teaching and
learning from herself; developing a critical awareness of her own process.
Similar to the student working on “Not marble nor the gilded
monuments,” the next excerpt demonstrates the writer’s awareness of
his own process. This student muses about his newfound understanding of
multilayered reading:
Initially, I had been sure formalism was the most noteworthy; however,
as I continued along, it became clear that analyzing one piece of
diction, regardless of the depth of its meaning, is futile without
context. This is why we use so many different theories and
methodologies; to piece together the puzzle of the literature, to bring
together every background and contextual piece of evidence we can gather
[…] one does not exist in solitude; they must both be
implemented and tied together paradoxically to fully develop
one’s own understanding of the piece. For me, this poem is many
different things; a feminist critique, a denial of patriarchal beliefs;
yet above all, its contextual background was the thing that allowed me
to make these observations and view the piece through multiple lenses
and theories.
Example 2.
Student B, “How do I love thee? Let me count the
ways” by Elizabeth Barrett Browning [emphasis added]
Here the student articulates an exciting discovery of how
theories and methodologies intersect in a single text. Not only has he realized
that methodologies and perspectives build on one another, but that multiplicity
is necessary. One reading or one theoretical approach “does not exist in solitude” and instead he implies
his own hard work “tied” the
readings together.
Moving on to two last excerpts from the reflections, these students overtly
articulate knowledge transfer. Indeed, most of our students began to see the
connections across theories and methodologies as we progressed through the
class, learning to apply and understand them in new contexts. In these final two
examples, however, recursive reading not only opened up moments of transfer in
class, but also allowed them to apply recursivity outside the classroom. The
following example is written by a senior science major. This course was her
first literature class in college and she reflects:
Analyzing a work from one perspective is effective, but using many
allows you to generate a composite image, a dynamic study, and a nuanced
view of a single piece. As previously mentioned, the process of writing
the annotations encouraged me to fully grasp and realize what each
methodology meant, instead of learning them superficially for our exam.
Fully realizing what this project has been and reflecting on it in this
paper makes me appreciate how much I've learned from this class and how
using different methodologies to examine a work can reveal new meanings.
The most important thing I’ve accomplished with my annotations is a
deeper understanding of how to analyze literature. I
think I’ll leave this class with a set of tools that I can use to
recognize certain things (power dynamics, the impact of the
patriarchy and colonialism, the modern and historical context of a
piece) in literary work and any other type of non-literature work I
read.
Example 3.
Student C, “When I have fears that I may cease to
be” by John Keats [emphasis added]
Suggesting that “new
meanings” might surface when we analyze literature or “any other type of non-literature work I
read” was a thrilling moment for us as teachers. The student’s
understanding of Keats’ famous poem grew exponentially over the course, but she
also recognized the applications of lenses and perspectives outside in areas
outside the classroom. Echoed in another reflection piece, this newly-declared
sophomore English major writes:
This whole project taught me that not only in a literary
context is there many different meanings and perspectives, but there
is in life as well. The same approach we took to developing our
annotations, is the same approach everyone should take when encountering
strangers or life experiences. More often than not, the real story isn’t
explicit or on the exterior; I learned to delve deeper into conversation
with the world and understand that there are frequently many meanings to
occurrences in our lives. Outside the written word, the project has
taught me that when going through life it is important to understand all
perspectives before we try to understand the bigger picture.
Example 4.
Student D, “Love’s Music,” Philip Bourke
Marston [emphasis added]
Conclusion
With annotation software, we were able to create an assignment that explicitly
taught the skill of recursive reading, encouraging our students to stay open in
their approaches to the text. By layering hypertext readings on top of each
other, we transformed what could have been a distraction – an annotation that
pulls students away from linear reading of the poem – into an opportunity to
return to the text in a new way. Students moved freely from one critical method
to another, from annotation to text and back again, creating a visual picture of
how literary criticism works. As the above examples demonstrate, this technique
also prevented students from quarantining one lesson from the next, which led to
better critical thinking and stronger papers.
Most exhilarating, at least from our perspective, is that the comments in their
final reflection papers reveal that some students have been able to make the
leap to transfer their knowledge of integrated critical theory to other areas of
their own lives. Students experience life through text, as conversations, media,
or mentally narrating their own lives. Their responses over the course of the
semester suggest that by using annotation to encourage recursive reading, our
classes might be offering theoretical lenses to think about these other texts
they encounter, beyond the walls of the classroom. Bell hooks ends
Teaching to Transgress with the idea that:
The classroom, with all its
limitations, remains a location of possibility. In the field of
possibility we have the opportunity to labor for freedom, to demand of
ourselves and our comrades, an openness of mind and heart that allows us
to face reality even as we collectively imagine ways to move beyond
boundaries, to transgress. This is education as the practice of
freedom.
[Hooks 1994, 207]
Encouraging transfer, we think, encourages movement with “an openness of mind.” We are deeply
committed to the model of liberal arts education that works hard to encourage
critical thinking in all situations, in all the various texts that circulate in
our world. Teaching students the skill of recursive reading using digital tools
may be a small step, but it is one more along the road to move “beyond boundaries.”
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