Abstract
James Patterson is the world’s best-selling living author, but his approach to
writing is heavily criticised for being too commercially driven — in many
respects, he is considered the master of the airport novel, a highly-productive
source of commuter fiction. A former marketing professional, Patterson uses his
business acumen to drive sales of his novels, which are largely written in
conjunction with lesser-known co-authors. Using stylometry, this paper analyses
the extent to which Patterson actually contributes to the writing of his novels,
situating his process within the context of literary capitalism and the novel as
a force of modernity.
Introduction
James Patterson is among the world’s best-selling living authors, but his
approach to literature is often derided. Patrick Anderson of
The Washington Post labels his work as “sick, sexist, sadistic and subliterate”,
while Stephen King describes Patterson, quite frankly, as “a terrible writer”
[
Mahler 2010]. Patterson’s background is in marketing, and indeed he makes unapologetic
use of advertising techniques to increase sales. His writing style is largely
considered to be simplistic; his subject matter excessively emotive. Moreover,
he hires collaborators, who, according to our analysis, complete much of the
actual writing. However, as we will describe in this paper, it is in such a
context that we can situate Patterson as working within structures of literary
production indissociable from the capitalist forces which drive most literary
production. His re-discovery and refinement of the novel’s popular traditions is
accompanied by a choice of style and subject matter that make his works
exemplary of the experience of leisure-time in late capitalism. Patterson’s
particular achievement is to be both author and producer; creator, brand, and
corporation. Patterson is, in many respects, as much a trademark as he is a
writer. His name is a stamp of approval. What does this mean for our
constructions of “the author”? Does Patterson’s name on the cover mean that
a particular novel is written
by Patterson, or that it has been
approved by Patterson? Is his name an indicator of the style of
a novel, or a gesture towards its structure and content? In our stylometric
analyses, we examine the extent to which Patterson actively collaborates on the
writing of his novels, exploring his approach in the context of the wider
culture industry and its capitalist modes of literary production. Patterson
appropriates and manipulates the economic, social, and industrial forces which
have shaped the form and content of the novel since its ascent in the
eighteenth-century. Informing our discussion with computer-assisted analyses,
the focus of which is Patterson, we problematise the relationship between the
novel and style.
Defining the Novel
There is disagreement on the precise origins of the novel, with some suggesting
its roots be traced back some two thousand years [
Doody 1997].
Typically, however, scholars accept Ian Watt’s assertion that the novel is an
eighteenth-century literary form, emerging as a response to romantic prose. It
is worth noting that while much of the literature we reference focuses on the
evolution of the British novel, wherein other scholars discuss the form as a
more global genre, we see little distinction, in the context of this study,
between the novels of American writers like Patterson and those of French
authors such as Dumas. Watt connects the rise of the novel to the forces of
modernity, particularly the emergence of the “commercial and industrial
classes”
[
Watt 2001, 61], as well as an increase in secular thinking and individualism. John
Richetti agrees, commenting in
The English Novel in
History, that early fiction marks “an important stage in the
fashioning and a key tool for the understanding of this evolving entity,
the socially constructed self”
[
Richetti 1999, 4]. Richetti further notes that the “expectations for narrative that
came to dominate the minds of readers in those years, as well as the
popularity of such narratives, may be related to larger intellectual and
social changes”
[
Richetti 2002, 2]. J. Paul Hunter presents early readers of the novel as being young, a
product of most novels being “about young people on the verge of
making important life decisions about love or career or both”
[
Hunter 2002, 20]. Crucial to this study, Hunter outlines how “novelists repeatedly set
themselves the task of addressing situations in which large numbers of
readers had a vital interest”
[
Hunter 2002, 20]. A dominant caricature was present at the time, Samuel Johnson describing
readers of the form as young, ignorant, idle time wasters [
Hunter 2002, 20–21], “not traditionally educated”
[
Hunter 2002, 20], a contention that Hunter refutes: “The time to read had to be stolen
from somewhere when life was lived under such difficult and precarious
conditions”
[
Hunter 2002, 21]. This tendency reverberates in the popular contemporary novel, where the
primary objective for authors is often the provision of entertainment. Hunter
attributes the eighteenth-century rise of the novel to readers’ need for “pleasure”:
… the joy of escape from drudgery or routine; the
pleasure of a story well told and a plot carefully built; satisfaction in
seeing outcomes (and even solutions) in the recognizable situations of daily
life; identification with characters who faced (and often mastered)
difficult situations; and, perhaps, the recognition of a part of oneself in
a fictional other who might take a different course or come to a different
end — as well as the more traditional pleasures (carried over from romances)
of compensatory fantasy in contemplating people quite unlike oneself. [Hunter 2002, 22]
The power of this fantasy emanates from the “combination of romance and formal realism”, a feat which the novel
accomplished “more insidiously than any previous
fiction”
[
Watt 2001, 205]. Further growth in commerce led to an increased market for print, but by
the same token, enhanced capacity for production: “Instead of a luxury affordable
only by the privileged and educated few, books and especially novels
were part of the revolution in the availability of consumer goods that
changed the nature of daily life for a large part of the population in
Britain as the eighteenth century progressed”
[
Richetti 2002, 6]. While access to the form has increased exponentially, its core traits
have remained intact: “the popular demand in fiction is
always for a mixed form, a romantic novel just romantic enough for the
reader to project his libido on the hero and his anima on the heroine,
and just novel enough to keep these projections in a familiar
world”
[
Frye 2006, 99]. As the novel became increasingly saturated by theory, and influenced by
social movements, each generation saw varying transformations to the form. As
Marthe Robert aptly notes, “its boundaries fluctuate in all
directions”
[
Robert 2000, 58]. What has remained a constant throughout is the continued democratisation
of reading, a movement which has often been connected to a perceived
deterioration in literary quality. This is where one of the primary concerns of
our examination takes hold, upon the tension between plot and style, and whether
or not, in such a context, style tells us little more than who completed the
actual writing, as opposed to who devised the narrative framework into which
such words are poured. It is difficult to argue which activity is more essential
without falling into the largely unhelpful binary of “substance over
style”. Saying this, and adages aside, the novel has always been about plot,
about reader-driven content designed to obscure social realities under romantic
elements and sensational details. Privileging style is the exception, not the
rule, and is limited to specific literary epochs, such as high modernism.
Patterson, as we will see, takes the contrary position to the stylists — not
only do his novels privilege fast-paced plot over character and situational
development, but his writing method seems to have been reduced down to providing
an overview of the plot which someone else, to whatever little extent, then
fleshes out. The relationship between plot and style has undergone increased
strain as a product of contemporary writing practices, more susceptible to
capitalist modes of production than ever before.
Brand-managed authors
The main subject of this study is James Patterson. At the time of writing, he is
the world’s most successful living author, outselling J. K. Rowling, Dan Brown,
and John Grisham combined [
Wood 2009]. Between 2006 and 2010, one
in every seventeen novels sold in the United States was authored by Patterson
[
Mahler 2010]. He has achieved this feat by publishing copious
numbers of reasonably successful novels rather than a select few blockbusters.
His most successful release, 1993’s
Along Came A
Spider, only reached number two on the bestseller charts. Its five
million print-run is small compared to that of say, Dan Brown’s
The Da Vinci Code; however, by 2014 he had published
in excess of 100 novels.
Patterson wrote his first thriller in 1976, but before the 1990s his main
employment and source of income lay in marketing. He worked at J. Walter
Thompson, where he became its youngest ever creative director and eventually
chief executive of North American operations [
Mahler 2010]. His
marketing continues to inform his approach to promotion and writing. In fact,
the two processes, Patterson’s writing and his marketing, are somewhat
indistinguishable. For
Along Came A Spider, he took
the unusual step of using television advertising [
Wroe 2013],
paying for it out of his own pocket [
Deighton 2006, 8]. Since
then, he has taken control of his own marketing from his publisher, Little,
Brown and Co., a division of Hachette [
Mahler 2010]. Two editors
and three full-time Hachette employees, plus assistants, work exclusively for
Patterson. According to Michael Pietsch, his editor and publisher, “Jim is at the very least
co-publisher of his own books”
[
Deighton 2006, 5]. Patterson, in this sense, is bigger than his publisher. In outranking
his publisher, he differs significantly from many forms of commercial fiction.
Mills and Boon, for instance, employ writers to create romance novels that
conform to a limited horizon of reader expectation. Watt describes how in the
eighteenth-century, the bookseller-publishers of Grub street used to employ
writers, often paying by the word, to churn out novels and translate works from
French [
Watt 2001, 55]. Commercial fiction has always been
driven by the demands of its readership. What makes Patterson different, is that
he exerts personal control over the publishing apparatus which seek to match
literary content to the market. Patterson brings a new level of rigour to
marketing within the publishing industry. This is acknowledged by Larry
Kirschbaum, former head of Little, Brown: “Until the last 15 years or so, the
thought that you could mass-merchandise authors had always been
resisted… Jim was at the forefront of changing that”
[
Mahler 2010].
What Patterson shares with the writers of Mills and Boon novels, the forgotten
eighteenth-century hack pieces, and the dime novels and penny dreadfuls of the
nineteenth-century, is that he writes simple, populistic works with no
pretensions of academic literary quality, designed to sell. But, like the
publishers of Grub Street, he has a greater number and variety of books to sell
than most authors can produce. As we will discuss, he achieves this in part by
hiring collaborators. Patterson therefore has properties of the traditional
popular author, properties of the publishing house, as well as those of the
modern marketing executive. If the development of the form and content of
popular fiction is explainable to a large extent by the socio-economic factors
that drive its production,
[1] then
Patterson is in the unusual position of possessing an overview of these factors,
and writing and commissioning fiction accordingly. As such, economic forces do
not simply shape his work externally or deterministically, but are put to play
by him from the outset to determine a written product that will be popular,
marketable, and replicable. It is said of Dumas, père, to whom we will return,
that he “did not exist at all, he was
only a myth, a trademark invented by a syndicate of editors to dupe the
public”
[
Lucas-Dubreton n.d.]. As already noted, Patterson is himself a trademark, a stamp of approval
that is more indicative of a novel’s structure than it is its style.
Reader-Driven Content
In an effort to broaden his following, Patterson has commissioned his own studies
into the demographics of his audience [
Deighton 2006, 5].
Such research has even directly influenced the content of his work — in one
case, in order to make up for a lag of sales on the West coast of the United
States, where John Grisham was the dominant author, he decided to locate his
second thriller series,
The Women’s Murder Club, in
San Francisco [
Mahler 2010]. In a generally complimentary
assessment, Jonathan Mahler says of Patterson’s TV campaign for his breakthrough
work,
Along Came A Spider: “It’s entirely possible, even quite
likely, that without those ads,
Along Came a
Spider never would have made the bestseller list, and that
James Patterson would now be just another thriller writer”
[
Mahler 2010]. The problem with such an appraisal is not that it ascribes Patterson’s
success to his marketing alone, but that it considers Patterson’s literary work
and the surrounding marketing as separate in the first place. Rather, the
literary and commercial facets of his work reinforce each other to the point
where, as in the case of his choice of location for
The
Women’s Murder Club series, they are indistinct.
When producing a novel, Patterson uses about a dozen readers as a soundboard for
the work in progress, making alterations as they point to the “weaker” elements of a story
[
Deighton 2006, 5]. His writing is designed to arrest
readers’ attention, and to encourage them to buy into a series of novels,
typically based around a primary, re-occurring character or characters. As
Nicholas Wroe explains: “His prose is doggedly functional
with short sentences and chapters relentlessly working to propel the
plot”
[
Wroe 2013]. His use of short chapters, says Mahler, “creates a lot of half-blank pages;
his books are, in a very literal sense, page-turners”
[
Mahler 2010]. The development of this approach is premeditated. Patterson himself
describes how, after his earlier, less successful works, he is “less interested in sentences now
and more interested in stories”
[
Mahler 2010]. Of his first work,
The Thomas Berryman
Number, he says that he “couldn't have supported [himself] on that kind of
book”, and that his writing is now “very self-consciously
commercial”
[
Wood 2009]. In developing a formula that has seen him become the world’s most
successful writer, Patterson’s new releases often do not receive press reviews,
but they attract a large number of reader reviews across online media. Here, it
is quickly apparent that his works are praised by readers for the qualities he
has intentionally fostered. An excerpt from an Amazon review for
I, Alex Cross reads: “This is well written — using Patterson's usual
quick and easy chapters,” evidently equating brevity with quality.
Another review for the same work concludes: “The thriller is written in short chapters, which I
like, and the font is large enough to make reading enjoyable. The prose is
clear, succinct, and paints a picture of full-blown evil and terror. A fast
read.”
[2]
That Patterson should let the reader instruct the form and content of his work is
not a perversion of the proper order of literary creation. Rather, it seems to
be constitutive of the rise to prominence of the novel in the modern era. For
Watt, the relative democratisation of readership in the eighteenth-century
encouraged writers to write “very
explicitly and even tautologically” for the audience, while also, as
we will see with Patterson, writing quickly in order to increase business
throughput [
Watt 2001, 56]. Thus, a simplification of writing
form was a defining characteristic of the development of the modern, popular
novel. Patterson also seems to be drawing from contemporary cinema and
television. The cinematic narrative is constructed in the editor’s lab out of a
patchwork of sounds and images; for Walter Benjamin, the screen actor’s
performance, and her experience of it, “is assembled from many
individual performances”
[
Benjamin 2002c, 112]. This mosaic-like structure is echoed in Patterson’s short paragraphs and
chapters which lurch the protagonist from crisis to crisis. As such, he has
further simplified the reading process by bringing its narrative presentation
into line with a reader whose attention is shaped by film and television, and
the truncated and informal writing style of the Internet.
In a short early article on a genre of German nineteenth-century literature,
Benjamin asks: “Chambermaid’s romances? Since
when are works of art categorized according to the class which consumes
them? Unfortunately, they are not, or all too seldom”
[
Benjamin 2005, 225]. Rather than being classified otherwise, such works have generally not
received any attention at all: “this entire body of literature
has been despised for as long as the superstitious belief in ‘absolute
art’ has existed”
[
Benjamin 2005, 225]. For Watt, appraising perhaps the first modern instance of the novel’s
dominance in eighteenth-century England, this profession, which “in the eighteenth century probably
constituted the largest single occupational group”
[
Watt 2001, 47], also shaped the content of the contemporaneous literature, most famously
in the eponymous heroine of
Pamela. Indeed, he goes
on to argue, the long dominant, and still prescient, themes of courtship, and
marrying above class, have their origin in the preponderance of women readers of
the novel, particularly from the lower, middle, and servant classes [
Watt 2001, 148–149, 154, 163–164]. Patterson’s novels, also
with a predominantly female readership [
Deighton 2006, 5],
span many genres, but largely consist of a standard thriller formula, for
instance serial-killers and their opposing crime fighters, the latter juggling,
usually successfully, their work with their family commitments, weaving
contemporary problems of conflicting work-family demands with wider social fears
about terror and criminality — for an example, see
Along
Came a Spider.
The
form of his novels also appears to be moulded by contemporary
experience. In particular, his work is perhaps best described as “commuter
fiction”. Nicholas Paumgarten describes how the average time for a
commute has significantly increased [
Paumgarten 2007]. As a
result, reading has increasingly become one of those pursuits that can pass the
time of a commute. For example, a truck driver describes how “he had never read any of
Patterson’s books but that he had listened to every single one of them
on the road”
[
Mahler 2010]. A number of online reader reviews also describe Patterson’s writing in
terms of their commutes. One such reviewer of Patterson’s
The Postcard Killers directly relates the writing style to the
realities of modern transitional life: “As a consequence of such short chapters I whizzed
through this book in under two hours and it was a fairly decent thriller and
a good way to spend time commuting to work.”
[3] With large print, and chapters of two or three pages,
Patterson’s works are constructed to fit between the stops on a metro line.
We believe that, here, Patterson again exemplifies traits characteristic of the
rise of the novel. Disposable, leisurely art is, for Benjamin, the dominant
aesthetic form of late modernity: “Just as the art of the Greeks
was geared toward lasting, so the art of the present is geared toward
being worn out”
[
Benjamin 2002d, 142]. To greatly summarise Benjamin’s position regarding the novel, this
disposability has its origins in the isolation of the subject, who no longer has
access to the continuity of communal experience. The novelist and reader are
exemplary for Benjamin of the crisis in experience that is symptomatic of late
modernity. The novelist, for their part, “... has secluded himself. The
birthplace of the novel is the individual in isolation ...”
[
Benjamin 2002b, 146]. The reader of the novel is also “isolated, more so than any
other reader … In this solitude of his … he destroys, swallows up the
material as a fire devours a log in a fireplace”
[
Benjamin 2002d, 156]. Benjamin suggests that this reflects a wholesale “change in the structure of their
experience”, as evidenced in the experience of navigating a city,
which he directly describes in terms of Marx’s theory of alienation of the
worker in industrial production [
Benjamin 2003a, 314]. The
pedestrian navigates through the city “in a series of shocks and collisions”,
corresponding their movements to the dictates of cars and traffic lights. They
are thus subjected by technology to “a complex kind of
training”
[
Benjamin 2003a, 328]. Modern subjects have “adapted themselves to machines” to the extent that their experience
is primarily that of “a reaction to shocks”
[
Benjamin 2003a, 329]. Traversing the city, the subject is isolated from others, as well as
alienated from herself. Benjamin cites George Simmel on public transport: “Before the development of
buses, railroads, and trams in the nineteenth century, people had never
been in situations where they had to look at one another for long
minutes or even hours without speaking to one another”
[
Benjamin 2003b, 20].
In advanced technological society, shared, enduring experience (
Erfahrung) gives way to “shock experience”, whether that of the
“passerby in the
crowd”, “the isolated ‘experiences’ of
the worker at his machine”
[
Benjamin 2003a, 329], or the film actor, whose performance is split “into a series of episodes capable of being
assembled” in the editing room [
Benjamin 2002c, 113]. Film is thus seen as giving modernity aesthetic form: “in film, perception conditioned
by shock was established as a formal principle”
[
Benjamin 2003a, 328]. We have discussed how Patterson aligns his work to the aesthetic
expectations of the subject in the age of television and cinema. But Patterson’s
work also responds directly to the shock experience of modernity which was
formalised in cinema. In their short segments, his books are shaped to the
disruptive punctuations of urban passage which they reflect and constitute.
By understanding the pervading social forces of occidental late capitalism, and
by anticipating the nature of everyday human experience within this network of
systems, Patterson produces novels which have the phantasms of modern life
inscribed upon their pages, and the fractured reality of modern experience
carved out as their form.
Collaboration & the Absence of Style
A much-noted aspect of Patterson’s approach is his use of collaborators for his
novels. In 2000 he published three books, all of which were successful, and this
prompted him to focus upon collaboration in order to dominate the market [
Wroe 2013]. As a result of this process, he produced 13 distinct
publications in 2012 and the same number in 2013. The co-authors are directly
employed by Patterson, assigned to a particular genre or series, and paid out of
Patterson’s own pocket [
Mahler 2010] at what is rumoured to be a
flat rate with bonuses and no royalties [
Wood 2009]. For many,
such as Gross and De Jonge who feature in our stylometric analysis, it has
provided a launching pad for their solo careers. While Patterson does not like
the term “boss”, he concedes that he is the senior figure in any
collaboration, and defends his position by way of employee satisfaction: “nobody quits”
[
Beard 2012], and “nobody asks for a raise”
[
Blum 2012]. Indeed, he primarily assumes a managerial role in the creative process
itself: “I write an outline for a book. The
outlines are very specific about what each scene is supposed to
accomplish. I get pages from [the collaborator] every two weeks, and
then I re-write them. That’s the way everything works. Sometimes I’ll
just give notes…”
[
Blum 2012]. Patterson appears to be part creator, part editor, and also part
guarantor of satisfaction — a sort of
Alfred Hitchcock
Presents stamp of quality. In his own words: “my name on the cover is the
assurance of a good read”
[
Deighton 2006, 2].
Defending his process, Patterson points out that collaboration has also been used
in other creative outlets, such as television [
Wroe 2013],
newspapers, cinema, and even the masonic guilds behind the medieval cathedrals
[
Beard 2012]. In employing collaborative methods, Patterson
has in fact aligned novel writing with the creative norm in contemporary
culture. As Hobsbawm says of the late twentieth-century: “Creation was now essentially
cooperative rather than individual, technological rather than
manual”
[
Hobsbawm 1994, 519]. A crucial juncture in the establishment of this modern paradigm, and of
its rise in the field of professional writing, was the introduction of the
producer system in early Hollywood cinema, wherein the producer takes precedence
over the director, overseeing a process in which labour is divided along lines
established in heavy industry, with the same goals of increased efficiency and
profit. The task of screenwriting is further sub-divided along these lines: “By the early teens, American
studios not only had writing departments but also sub-specialties within
those departments”
[
Thompson 1993, 387].
Some commentators have described Patterson’s successful application of these
methods to novel writing as unprecedented. Mahler, for instance, states:
Books, at least in their traditional
conception, are the product of one person’s imagination and sensibility,
rendered in a singular, unreproducible style and voice. Some novelists have
tried using co-authors, usually with limited success. Certainly none have
taken collaboration to the level Patterson has… [Mahler 2010]
But Patterson’s approach is not as new as Mahler claims. Division of labour was
in fact adopted in literature from at least the mid-nineteenth-century. Benjamin
frequently discusses the growing application of industrial methods on
nineteenth-century French literature as the commercial returns for literature
increased. As such, the French novel, for Benjamin, appears to build upon the
commercial origin of the British novel, industrializing the already commercial
form. The most commercially successful writers of the era included Sue, Scribe,
and Dumas, each of which employed collaborators in order to increase output [
Benjamin 2003c, 14–15]. Benjamin cites Kreysig, who describes
the playwright Eugene Scribe in terms which mirror accounts of Patterson’s
method:
...he transferred the
principle of division of labour from the workshops of tailors, cabinet
makers, and manufacturers of pen nibs to the ateliers of the dramatic
artists… Scribe chose the subject, sketched out the main lines of the plot
... and his apprentices would compose the appropriate dialogue or verses.
...their name would appear on the title page (next to that of the firm) as a
just recompense, until the best would break away and begin turning out
dramatical works of their own invention, perhaps also in their turn
recruiting new assistants. [Benjamin 2003b, 671–672]
Dumas took simultaneous contracts for serialised novels from different journals
[
Benjamin 2003b, 585], once occupying “almost simultaneously, with
three of his novels, the feuilleton sections of
La
Presse, Le Constitutionnel, and
Le
Journal des debats”
[
Benjamin 2003b, 760]. He designated the writing task to others in order to keep up with
demand. As a caricature puts it: “It was said that Dumas employed a whole army of poor writers in his
cellars” while he drank champagne with actresses [
Benjamin 2003b, 15]. He was accused by de Mirecourt of
running “a factory of
novels” and the
Revue des Mondes questioned
whether he even knew the names of all the titles published in his name [
Benjamin 2003c, 15]. De Mirecourt writes: “his novels are by Maquet,
Fiorention, Meurice, Malefille, or Paul Lacroix … [he] dares, monster that
he is, to sign his name alone.” As a consequence of this criticism,
Dumas was obliged to publicly recognise Maquet and others as collaborators [
Lucas-Dubreton n.d.]. In his defence, Dumas sought credit for providing
so much employment: “In twenty years, he said, he
had written 400 novels and 35 plays. He had created jobs for 8160 people
— proofreaders, typesetters, machinists, wardrobe mistresses”
[
Benjamin 2002a, 276].
Marx and Engels, in a certain sense, approved of Dumas and Scribe, in that they
saw their adoption of industry techniques as formally aligning popular culture
with the modes of production. In
The German
Ideology, they favourably compare French popular fiction to the
German, paying particular attention to the latter’s appropriation of the
division of labour:
In proclaiming the
uniqueness of work in science and art, Stirner adopts a position far
inferior to that of the bourgeoisie. At the present time it has already been
found necessary to organize this ‘unique’ activity. Horace Vernet would not
have had time to paint even a tenth of his pictures if he regarded them as
works which ‘only this Unique person is capable of producing’. In Paris, the
great demand for vaudevilles and novels brought about the organization of
work for their production, organisation which at any rate yields something
better than its ‘unique’ competitors in Germany. [Marx & Engels 2001, 108]
Thus, by employing collaborators and dividing the writing process in order to
increase profit, Patterson re-establishes techniques which dominated popular
fiction in nineteenth-century Paris. While these writers were often derided for
this, Marx and Engels perceived that, by employing the principles of division of
labour which defined working existence, the collaborative approach generated
mass entertainment that was pleasurable, disposable, and efficient to create.
The culturally dominant forms of mass entertainment were thence increasingly
those which adopted the principle of division of labour: in cinema, and then
television, in the publisher-brand Mills and Boon novels in which the individual
authors were expendable and interchangeable, and then in Patterson, who has
become one of the world’s most commercially successful authors by using
hierarchical collaboration to launch multiple bestsellers each year. By drawing
on established cinematic archetypes of plot to write the kind of suspense which
people expect, and by employing a simple, punchy format, Patterson has devised a
commodity which is amenable to replication. As such, he displays the primary
motivation which has driven the production of the novel since the
eighteenth-century Grub Street booksellers began employing writers to fashion
Pamela-esque romances — the drive to meet
commercial demand [
Watt 2001, 47].
Stylometric Analysis
Gaby Wood comments in
The Guardian that the
sentences in Patterson’s novel “are not
designed to be lingered over”
“they are more or less all
plot”, she argues [
Wood 2009]. To his credit, Patterson has
been very open in describing how his novels are produced. This paper seeks to
further elaborate on this process, using computational stylistics to produce
statistically valid indicators of the amount of actual writing that Patterson
contributes before deeming a novel worthy of his brand. This information will
allow us to better understand the role of brand-managed authors like Patterson
in the creative process, and indeed, how they are situated within the context of
the novel as a form of literary capitalism.
We evaluate the relative contributions of Patterson and two of his collaborators
using versions of Burrow’s Delta, a widely-used lexical measure for English
texts [
Burrows 2002]. We selected the collaborators Peter de Jonge
and Andrew Gross for this investigation, largely as a consequence of access to
appropriate single-author samples. Patterson, by his own accounts, allocates
most of the actual writing to his junior partners. We formed the working
hypothesis that the collaborative novels would be stylometrically more similar
to texts written primarily by Patterson’s co-authors, rather than to any of the
novels attributed to Patterson alone. This study is based on the premise that
the lexical features we have selected are effective in distinguishing the
sentence writer over the architect of the plot. This correlates with much of the
field’s existing research. Patrick Juola, for instance, demonstrates that in
attempted forgeries, the lexical signature of the forger overrides the semantic
content which might associate it with the impersonated party [
Juola 2013]. Our second hypothesis was that Patterson’s
contribution would be strongest at critical moments in the text. Given the
plot-driven genre, we believed that these would typically be present at the
beginning and end of the novels.
To test our first hypothesis, we employ a “Bootstrap Consensus Tree” cluster
analysis over maximum frequency words ranging from 100 to 1000, in intervals of
100, with the Burrow’s Delta metric, using the
Stylo package for
R
[
Eder & Rybicki 2013]
[
Eder, Kestemont, & Rybicki 2013]. We use a consensus strength of 0.5, meaning
that we formed a tree showing proximity wherever this occurred in 50% or more of
the 10 maximum frequency clusterings described [
Wilkinson 1996].
For our second hypothesis, we use the Rolling Delta technique [
Rybicki, Kestemont, & Hoover 2013]
[
van Dalen-Oskam & van Zundert 2007]
[
Hoover 2011]. To provide a general intuitive description of this
method, Burrow’s Delta distances are measured between the collaborative text and
single-author texts for each participating author. However, distances are
measured to “windows” of the collaborative text, allowing for estimation as
to which sections carry the stylistic fingerprint of one contributor over
another. Sample single-author tests are then plotted over the baseline of the
collaborative text, where greater proximity to the baseline indicates greater
stylistic similarity, as defined by the Delta distance metric.
A more robust study of this topic would need to assess Patterson’s contribution
to the abstract entity which is the plot of the works we have examined. We did
make an attempt at this, computationally measuring the frequency of action verbs
across a text.
[4] The expectation was, considering the genre, that there would be
significant spikes at particular points in the novel. Our hope was there would
be some noticeable trends, which did occur, across some of the Patterson only
novels, as opposed to the co-authored texts, which presented far more variation.
This would suggest that there is something significant in our results, yet, we
are not in a position to reasonably conclude that we are detecting an authorial
fingerprint, rather than just structures common to this particular genre. It
would be interesting, however, to return to this aspect of our analysis at a
further point with a more conclusive methodology.
In this paper, we examine the following collaborative texts:
Patterson & De Jonge:
- Beach House (2003)
- Beach Road (2006)
Patterson & Gross:
- 2nd Chance (2002)
- 3rd Degree (2004)
- Judge and Jury (2006)
Patterson & Karp:
- Kill Me If You Can (2011)
- NYPD Red (2012)
Our solo texts, by author, are as follows:
DeJonge:
- Shadows Still Remain (2009)
- Buried On Avenue B (2012)
Gross:
- The Dark Tide (2008)
- Don't Look Twice (2009)
- Killing Hour (2011)
- 15 Seconds (2012)
- No Way Back 2013)
For Patterson, we used this fixed set of nine solo works:
- First to Die (2001)
- Four Blind Mice (2002)
- The Lake House (2003)
- London Bridges (2004)
- Maximum Ride: The Angel Experiment
(2005)
- Maximum Ride: Saving The World And Other Extreme
Sports (2007)
- I, Alex Cross (2009)
- Fang (2010)
- Nevermore (2012)
The following visualisation displays our bootstrap consensus tree over the entire
dataset:
As predicted, the collaborative works all cluster with the respective junior
writer. Within both the De Jonge and Gross clusters, the collaborative works
form a distinct sub-cluster. Within the Patterson cluster, the Maximum Ride series of novels are separated from
another cluster consisting of Alex Cross novels and the Patterson novel, The Lake House. One surprise result is that First to Die, a solo Patterson text, is clustered with
the subsequent works in The Women’s Murder Club
series, which he wrote with Andrew Gross. This could simply represent a
limitation of the Delta metric over these texts, or alternatively, it could
indicate that Gross was so influenced by the particular style that Patterson
manifested in this work that he imitated it more exactly than Patterson managed
in any of the other works under examination. A third possibility is that the new
collaborative series, The Women’s Murder Club,
opened with a purported solo Patterson work, when it was in fact a co-authored
novel.
Our full study comprised Rolling Deltas for all collaborative texts, under a
number of different settings. For the purpose of this abstract we include just
two Rolling Delta studies, First to Die and its
sequel in the series, Second Chance:
For Second Chance, Gross’ texts are closest
throughout, apart from First to Die, which, as we
have already discussed, is attributed solely to Patterson. First to Die's model is more interesting, as the work presents
itself as we would expect a true collaboration in which the authors have shared
the task of writing passages or sentences with Patterson intervening at critical
junctures. This seems to add plausibility to the conjecture that the work might
in fact have been written by Gross and Patterson, rather than Patterson alone,
as is officially stated. One might ultimately discount such a possibility, and
explain this anomaly as an artifact caused by the limitations of stylometric
analysis in its current stage of development. However, were we to accept these
results at face value, they might indicate an interesting situation in
commercial fiction: namely, a junior writer, Andrew Gross, having his name
erased from a book he co-wrote in order to increase the commercial value and
status of that book as a product.
Conclusions
The quantitative data suggests that Patterson’s collaborators perform the vast
majority of the actual writing. Our results demonstrate that Patterson, like
Dumas, has commodified his reputation as an author and met demand through
delegation. However, it appears that Patterson has generally been transparent
regarding his collaborative process, and has offered sufficient accreditation,
tutelage, opportunity, and financial reward to those with whom he works.
The novel has always been a commercial form. Its rise was a product of the rise
of the bourgeoisie. But Patterson has perhaps brought the novel to its logical
conclusion. In a certain sense, Patterson’s works are not reducible to their
socio-economic context. Rather, wresting marketing control from his publisher,
hiring his own soundboard readers, and employing subsidiary writers, Patterson
generates pulp far more concentratedly than the vagaries of traditional
historical materialism would generally allow. While we might see “high
literature” as irreducible to its immediate socio-economic context
because the author is in a kind of dialogue with the whole literary and even
metaphysical canon, Patterson’s work is irreducible in the sense that he creates
his fiction in accordance with his own manipulations of its economic base.
As Patterson says: “above all my brand stands for
story. I became successful when I stopped writing sentences and started
writing stories. Editors think it's about style. It's not. It's all
story”
[
Deighton 2006, 5]. On the one hand, we note that for Patterson, this is just as well, as
our analysis shows that his stylometric fingerprint is sometimes weak, even in
his solo works. To keep things in perspective, we recall Aristotle's assertion
that plot (
μῦθος) is the “arrangement of the incidents
(
ἡ
τῶν
πραγμάτων
σύστασις)”
[
Aristotle 1932]. Is plot, then, what makes an author? These findings demonstrate how
style is very much privileged across particular literary aesthetics, and that it
is, in many respects, relegated to an afterthought within contemporary popular
fiction. Style remains a powerful measurement in experiments of this kind, but
as a literary device, it is not always present within a form that has long held
strong ties with the forces of late capitalism. When we see the name Patterson,
Dumas, or Hitchcock, is that an indication of reliability rather than
authenticity; substance rather than style?
Acknowledgements
Part of this research was generously funded by the Higher Education Authority,
under the Programme for Research in Third Level Institutions, Cycle 5, and under
the Irish Research Council’s EMBARK Initiative.
Earlier incarnations of this study have been presented at the following
conferences:
Fuller, Simon, and James O’Sullivan. “‘More or less all plot’: A Rolling Delta
Analysis of the Commodification of Collaboration.” Canadian
Society for Digital Humanities Annual Conference, Congress of the Humanities and Social Sciences, Brock University,
Saint Catharine’s, 26 May 2014.
Fuller, Simon, and James O’Sullivan. “Beyond Style: Literary Capitalism and the
Publishing Industry.” Digital Humanities, Lausanne, 10
July 2014.
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